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I didnt know I could have a blog >.< WHY DIDNT YOU PEOPLE TELL ME! I coulda been putting songs on here for all of GC.com to see. RAWR EVIL QUIET PEOPLE. Well okay since I found out I can have a blog too like billy, benji, paul, dean, and joel I shall use it! Ok well heres a new song I wrote last night called Fake.

All I ever did was care
Keeping my anger bottled
but now I'm pulling out my hair
fighting to keep myself from going insane
and it really it was never fair
What they did to me

I had my heart on my sleeve
but they took it and
broke it
along with my sanity
never shoulda tried
only they wouldnt let me free
wish they werent so fake

So many days gone by
wishing they never stole them
sometimes I wanna cry
pulling at the bands on my wrist
I fell for such a lie

broken by simple words
an act of basic skill
played on the stage of my life
giving me a deadly chill
cooling the warmth in me
til I'm freezing cold

I had my heart on my sleeve
but they took it and
broke it
along with my sanity
never shoulda tried it
only they wouldnt let me free
wish they werent so fake

Now I'm broken
fallen over
on my last branch
gonna beserk if
They dont stop pretending

I had my heart on my sleeve
but they took it
and broke it
along with my sanity
never shoulda tried it
only they wouldnt let me free
wish they werent so fake
never so fake
being so fake
couldnt ever tell
so damn fake!

I dont think its one of my better works but I never really thought my work was good. Anyone wanna make a comment on my work? cmon please. I need help with my writing to see if this style works.

EDIT: yeah I just noticed how bad the rythem goes. I'm still trying to improve my songs.