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I just wrote this poem...I'm super upset right now....I needed to vent

She's sick of the pain from crying
She seems okay outside, but inside is dying
She wishes he was still here
With him, she had no fears
He was her life and she feels as if she can't hold on
She honestly doesn't know how she getting along
She doesn't feel she has a real friend to care
with her pain, no one is really aware
She's loosing her faith and she doesn't know why
She knows later on, with him she'll fly
Untill then, she doesn't know what to do
The one that shot him doesn't see what she goes through
She's broken inside
Why, oh why, so often does she cry?

Tags: life, poetry, sadness

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Comment by Jesse Ann Shadows on March 27, 2010 at 9:03pm: i think i mailed The 'end of a sentence' to you. read it. it mite make u feel better (i relieze how long ago this happened-- but, come on, who doesnt like a good laugh?) if i dodnt mail it 2 u, just look at my page under about me.

Comment by Jesse Ann Shadows on March 27, 2010 at 5:15pm: holy crap, srry, i just relized how long my comment was. 0.0

Comment by Jesse Ann Shadows on March 27, 2010 at 5:14pm: dont b sad. t think we all, sadly, deal with something like that in r lifes. my sister (as we go by) is emo and it bothers me, becuz of how close she cuts to her wrist.she prefers to b called eclipse, and one of r best friends scarred herself writing 'LIFE SUCKS'. i went goth (which is defined as hating every1) when i moved-- i had no say, my mom wanted me to move wit her and her gorrila of a bf. (ask benji madden fan- shes seen him. ask her how pissy i was and how i act now-- still pretty pissy) im still goth (or atleast candy-goth). i get pissed easily and hate itwhen ppl r sexist. most of my friends r girls. dont feelalone. we all grief. mayb we never truly get over it, but we can go on living. i am a author, and i base most of my stories on comedy, romance, dramaa, real life happenins, and allthe tragic of life. i once wrote a story based on my bloody valentine by gc. dont worry. if u ever need any1 to talk 2, u no me and benji madden fan r all ears

Comment by GC FrEaK203 on October 12, 2009 at 1:13pm: did some1 shoot a boy you like or something if thats whats wrong i had cousin kill himself cuz ppl were teasing him so he sliced my hand becuz i tried to pull the knife out of his hand when he sliced his throat open at school lunch.if you have anything to tell me i will under stand you. :(