meh..new song im workin on for my band:},pls comment wat u think

These children they dont even care/And their parents they dont even know/
And all the people by the wayside, they cant even see/THAT THER'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!

All Shall Perish
In hellfire and brimstone
All Shall Perish
All Shall Perish
Few to be saved by divine intervention
All Shall Perish
The time is at hand (you must)begin to repent

Suffacation,and agony, theres no escaping, this acid rain/The children are running/
And they're screaming in pain/ The sins of the mother/ She thought to invent!!!/
Brought up to bear/Make the father scream and begin to repent/raaaaargh!!!!!!

All Shall Perish
In hellfire and brimstone
All Shall Perish
All Shall Perish
Few to be saved by divine intervention
All Shall Perish
The time is at hand(you must) begin to repent

Ow please-stop/mommy it hurts/PLEASE HELP ME/Mommy where are you/Daddy cant you save me?My eyes they're burning/Waaaaaagh/Why won't it stop/Pleeaase maake it stop/PLEASE HELP ME/Im sorry/Im sorry ill never do it again/I didnt mean too/ Begging you make it staaaaaawp!!!!

All Shall Perish
In hellfire and brimstone
All Shall Perish
All Shall Perish
Few to be saved by divine intervention
All Shall Perish
The time is at hand(you must) begin to repent