"summer trip"

Chapter 1

It's the last day of school. Everyone in the class was talking about where they wanted to go and what to do with their summer. Nate said: I thought about talking my friends on a trip somewhere, but not sure yet.

The kids were looking at the clock. 5 minutes to go now said: Tonya. Everyone was waiting and could not wait any longer. Ring! Ring! The bell rang and school is now out. Chris said: schools out! Nate had Tonya and Chris, and had said: come over so we can go on a trip fro the summer. Oh and by the way when you guys see Mander tells her too come over also.

The 3 friends went to Nate’s house to find out where they were going to go for the summer. Nate was looking on the internet for a place for everyone to have fun and somewhere no one has been before.

Chris and Mander were talking and said: what about a camping trip? Tonya said: no, thanks I don’t want to go camping, can we think of somewhere else place? Nate said: I’ve got it you guys! We can go to Kings Island in Cincinnati,Ohio.
Everyone thought that would be a great place to go for the summer.Chris, Tonya, and Mander went home to pack for their summer trip. 2 hours later, Nate came to our house to pick them up for their trip.

Chapter 2

They were driving for hours and hours. They had made stopped for gas and food. On their way to Ohio, they stopped again because Nate was getting tired and wanted to take a nap. Nate woke Mander up from a good dream. Mander got up and asked what’s wrong? Nate said: I’m just tired and wanted you to drive us. Mander and Nate get out of the car to switch places. When Nate got back into the car he was out. Tonya was still sleeping in the back also. Mander woke Chris up so she could have some one to talk to on their way.

Chapter 3

They filly got to Cincinnati, Ohio. Mander woke everyone up in the car to see if they wanted to stay somewhere. Everyone said: yeah sure that’s fine with us. Mander drove up to block to the nearest place that was Holiday Inn. They stay the night there. They get two beds in two rooms they were in. the girls get one room and the boys got the other room. Everybody had got their things in their rooms. Tonya said: let’s go swimming in the pool! Mander asked the boys if they wanted to go also. Nate and Chris said: no thanks. Chris said: I’m tried maybe later I’ll come down there with you girls. Nate said: for me, I’m going to my room to watch T.V. because Reaper is on tonight on change CW4 at nine a clock and I don’t want it miss it.

The girls went back up to their room so they could get ready to go swimming. While Chris and Nate went back to their room. The girls walked down to the pool to go swimming. They swam for one hour; they got ready to get out going back to their room and went to sleep.

The next day everybody got up early, to get to Kings Island. Everyone was so excited to go back into the car. Chris checked the two rooms out. So they could left from the hotel Holiday Inn and continued their trip.

Chapter 4

Tonya drove everyone to Kings Island. They get there, Mander yelled as lowed as she could “we’re here filly!!” Tonya drove around and around trying to fine somewhere to park. Nobody cared where they parked; they just wanted to get inside. Tonya filly found a place to park it was at D, 40. They had a long, long was to walk. Nate asked if there was anything else closer. Chris looked at the latter and number to see where their car is parked. While they were walking Mander looked up to see what parking number and letter they were at A, 15. Chris said: hey you guys we don’t very much longer before we get up to the doors. To them it seemed like for ever.

They finally got in, Nate suggested to do what everybody wants to do. Chris, Nate, Tonya, and Mander wanted to go in this hunted house. Tonya was not sure about it; everybody was telling Tonya it was okay.

They walked in there was hardly any lights just flickering candles and dimming lights. There were cobwebs everywhere you turned. The rooms had been set up like that 1900’s or the 1800’s. The floor squeaked when you walked on it so it sounded like someone or something was be hind you. Tonya heard someone screaming and was getting scared. Nate said: Tonya, its okay just recording of someone there this to be scary.That’s how they sat this thing up.They walked down this long, narrow hall wall, with doors on both sides. Chris tries to opening them to see what its inside but they are looked, but he tries to opening this odd looking one not like the other doors. This door is old, odd shaped. It’s got some kind of a loin door knock. It was strange looking. Chris shuck the door handle and about time the door slowly opened. The room was dark and cobwebs throw out the room. There was a chair on the side of the room.Chris and Nate started to walk around the room. Nate pulled his cell phone out to use the light so him and Chris didn’t run or knock anything over. While the boys walked around there was a book shelves the book were covered in dust and spider webs. Mander said: maybe i fyou move the books off the bookshelf it might move and open a secrt passage. the bookshelves one wall of the room to the other. Chris told the girls to come over to the bookshelves to help moive the books. The girls walked to the boys about that time the door slamed shut. Tonya said:Oh No!, what we going to do! Mander said: maybe if you move the books off the bookshelf, it might move and open a secret passage. The bookshelves one wall of the room to the other. Chris told the girls to come over to the bookshelves to help move the books. The girls walked to the boys about that time the door slammed shut.
Tonya said “oh no!” what we going to do? Mander said:“it’s okay Tonya. We can still get out the doors. The doors are not locked, here I will show you. The girls walk back to the door but there was no door handle. Tonya started getting scared; we’re never getting out of there! Said: Tonya. Mander went to help the boys to find a secret passage. Everybody was throwing books to hope that they will open some kind of secret door for another way out. Chris pulled a book, they though they had opened a doorway out. No, instead the walls started to move closer together. They started throwing books off the shelves again hoping to stop the walls from moving or to open a secret path.

Chapter 5

They finally removed almost all the books off the shelves when Nate saw that there was one book at the very top. Mander suggested that someone should climb up the shelves to pull the book down. Hris offered to go and get the book. As he started climbing up the shelves, they heard a cracking noise coming off the wooden shelves. Tonya yelled “Chris get down Now!” Chris said “no, I’ve almost got it”, as he reached higher. Just then, one of the shelves began to break in two.
Chris lost his balance and fell in the pile of books below him. Chris screamed in agony as he landed on a hard cover book poking him in the back. Chris saved them from becoming flat pancakes. Suddenly they realized that the walls stopped moving closer together except for one. This wall started turning sideways to show a dark passage way but where would it take them? The four friends used their cell phones to light the dark passage way. They held each others hand so they would stay together. Nate lead them down the long winding passage way. Mander saw a light at the end of the passage. “Look, a light. I hoped it’s a way out of this haunted house” They kelp walking to wards the light. The next thing they knew they were outside. They didn’t want to go to a haunted house ever again.
The End

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