So...what do you think?

Guys, these are some poems i wrote just because..please dont be mean about it..im an ammature, but its just how i feel about stuff...

This beautiful family(joel,nicole,harlow)
This beautiful couple
That no one blieved in
Has come out to be amazing
Even when times were deceiving
The girl had some problems
The boy really new
But true love brought them together
And now they're sticking like glue
Along came Harlow
The mircle child
The love for their baby was quite more than mild
Joel and Nicole
They make each other whole
This beautiful family no one can can doubt
They love each other forever
They cant be apart
Cuz all it would do is break their heart

These rock star brothers(joel and benji)
Rock N' Roll dreamin'
Thats all these boys had
All alone with a mum
Cuz they lived without a dad
Not much money at all,
Worked as shampoo boys
To pay to get by
They had it tough, im not gonna lie
But who would have guess it
They've made it so far
Its a dream come true
Just like when you wish apon a star
Their dreams came true
And now they are rockstars
But, They havent turned bad
As a lot of of rock stars had
They are still true themselves
And their families you see
They are as loving as two brothers can be


Billy and Linz Martin
Love never changes
As far as I can see
Cuz If love could be lost
This couple wouldnt be
What they are now
Together and well
This couples been together
Since highschool you see
Love could never escape
Even though it was free
They loved each other then
And they love each other now
Mr and Mrs Martin
With each other as much as time will allow
Since march 1st of 2008
And together forever
Soul mates..

Why cant this love be? (benji and paris)
I just dont get
Why this love cant be
Cuz They are in love, thats all I can see
The girl, she's made mistakes,
But why cant we all just let them live and take
The time to think about these two
Their feelings
The love for each other
Why cant this love be..
As long as they love one another